1、As is vividly depicted in the picture, which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.
2、The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably,
3、Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.
4、This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal.
二、中間段落
中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害,并舉例論證,預測危害的趨勢
第二段七個句子,首先第一句從宏觀上談這種現象的總的有兩到三個點危害或者原因,第二句談這個現象的第一個危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星級句子,通常是談對個人身心健康的危害性, 第三個句子談第二個危害,通常是用一個豪華級的比較級的句子,讓老師耳目一新,通常是談這個現象對社會的危害.第四個句子談對家庭或學校的危害.第五個句子談一個代替 “for example”的十五個單詞的好句子,意思是說沒有更好的例子來證明正如下文.第六個句子是例子群體的出現,談根據一項調查表明,80%以上的人只要從事經歷過這個消極的現象一定會對個人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句話是預測趨勢的二十五個單詞的鉆石級的句子,談以下預測趨勢,表明這種現象再這樣下去,就會導致惡劣的結果出現,甚至是毀滅性的后果。
1、To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward.
2、To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
3、In addition, nothing is more harmful than主題 to contradict with a harmonious society.
4、Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.
5、No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below .
6、According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主題will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.
7、If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.