2013年英語一小作文、大作文點評及范文（文都版）

考研英語真題答案來源：文都教育 2013-01-05　

2013年考研英語一作文的題目，在形式上和內容上，都完美的反應了2012年9月所發布的英語大綱的相關理念：即中規中矩，穩中有變。

在小作文方面，體裁不變，出題內容和形式上有所調整。

2013年的英語一小作文，考察體裁仍然為信。這是考研小作文自2005年成為英語一的考察題型之后，連續第三年考察書信體裁。也是除2010年以外第八次考察書信格式。

要注意凡是書信，都有相關的體裁的格式要求，即在文都課堂上，我反復強調過的“小作文重格式”的意義所在。

書信的體裁格式十分固定，我們可以針對其內容，提前準備如下：
（1）人稱：Dear Sir or Madam,
（2）自我介紹：I am…… who
（3）感謝：My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.

Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.

Thank you for your time and consideration.
（4）回信： I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Your prompt attention to my letter would be highly appreciated.

落款：your sincerely，Li Ming
以上的內容是無論什么小作文都可以使用的固定內容，即可以不變的內容。結合今年的真題，我們一樣可以使用如上提
前準備好的內容，所以說考研小作文是“中規中矩”的。

而小作文的“穩中有變”，即其內容上的考察的變化，和出題方式的變化。

在原有的2011年和2012年的小作文的題干中，有關于小作文的書信內容的提示，是使用了分項提示的方式。這種原有的方式呢，會使考生較為容易掌握相關的考察重點。但是，也較為容易組織提綱。

而在今年，小作文題目的題干，是以一句話提示的方式給出即“Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college，inviting him/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.”
這句話的內容，其實了許多的重要信息，其中，直接給我們的是：

寫作目的：邀請
人物關系：師生
活動名稱：English speech contest.
出席目的：be a judge for the contest
在這些直接給出的信息外，其題干中還隱藏了一些相關內容：

（1）人物關系：雖然同一“college”，但是陌生人，所以自我介紹，應出現“student”，
（2）隱含內容：比賽的時間地點
（3）活動舉辦：沒有說，所以，隨便寫咯。
通過這種出題方式的變化，英語一的小作文，就其形式上和內容上，對于原有的方式，轉變為更加靈活的內容。這其實是對學生的復習深度和英語應試能力的一種深化考察。
所以，我們要將我們之前準備的有關于“邀請的”句加入寫作即可。

范文(126)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of your students who are being taught by you in this college.

The purpose of the letter that I am writing is to invite you to be a judge for the English speech contest which is host by CCAV. This contest will be held in the theater of our college on April 1, 2013,and the occasion will start at seven o'clock in the evening .We would be honored to have you there with us.

I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision. Your prompt attention to my letter would be highly appreciated.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,Li Ming

大作文的內容，則更是沒有任何的“驚喜”，即從圖片，到內容，都可以說是延續了歷年的出題方向。考研了與大學生相關的六類主題其中之的成長內容。

可以說，其內容是完全符合復合我們預料，所以，我們可以給出評價：中規中矩！

面對此內容，我們可以結合之前準備的內容，輕松的寫出作文如下：

范文：237
As is vividly depicted in the picture, many young people are standing together when they find that there are so many ways to go.Thus，all of them are stopping there and waiting for help. Obviously, it is the shortage of confidence for their future that makes it impossible for them to get the attainment they want.

Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce and there are more and more chances for us. But it is impossible for the ones to achieve attainments if they have no striving spirit to surmount the difficulties. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the striving spirit. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of fighting is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.

To my way of thinking，the problem that all of the college are just stopping and waiting but no fighting and thinking will generate severe consequences .Measures should be adopted before things get worse.It is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to make young people change their outlook of life and acquire determined spirit. Only by this way is it reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.